Thursday, 12 May 2016

One Story, Five Climaxes

Can a short story written within 55 words have 5 different climaxes? 

Here is my amateur attempt at it...

Scenario  - 1

I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

I smiled again..

…That was such a tough question…

…that First interview !!

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Scenario -2

I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

I smiled again..

..The new born baby..

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Scenario -3

I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

..She was getting married…

…I smiled again, controlling my tears..

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Scenario -4


I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

I smiled again..

..The judge broke his pen’s tip,

I was to be hanged…

I smiled wryly.

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Scenario -5

I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

I smiled again..

…the little girl hugged me tight


–Her favorite Teddy doll J
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Let me know how they are ad add yours too :)

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