Tuesday, 24 May 2016

[55 Fiction} - Nature's Elements

EARTH

[Place: SriLankan Refugee Camp]

The policeman was checking everyone’s belongings, when an eight year old refused to show his pouch.

“What’s that ? show me”

“I wont” uttering, he started to run…

The cop chased him, hit his legs with his lathi, then squeezed his hands to get the pouch and emptied it… to see sand…

The trembling boy said ,”My mother land”.

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AIR

Maria, my ex-love, was seemingly dejected. I went near her and gently touched her hair.

“I cant forget him mom! Even now I feel he’s around…” she told her mom.

“Maria! You are done with him.. Don’t even think about that moron scientist. He has time only for his experiments!”

I smirked and gave her a gentle kiss, thinking of the moronic science, that made me invisible J
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WATER

George smiled unceremoniously as he pushed David into the water. He was an expert in his job.

Shocked and surprised, David cried for help and tried hard not to drown, but in vain. He gasped for breath and was nearing his death.

George, his swimming teacher, then jumped into the pool to teach him the tricks.


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Thursday, 12 May 2016

One Story, Five Climaxes

Can a short story written within 55 words have 5 different climaxes? 

Here is my amateur attempt at it...

Scenario  - 1

I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

I smiled again..

…That was such a tough question…

…that First interview !!

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Scenario -2

I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

I smiled again..

..The new born baby..

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Scenario -3

I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

..She was getting married…

…I smiled again, controlling my tears..

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Scenario -4


I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

I smiled again..

..The judge broke his pen’s tip,

I was to be hanged…

I smiled wryly.

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Scenario -5

I smiled.

That’s all I could do..

I looked all around..

No one was there to help me ..

I wanted to speak… express what I felt. .tell them everything..

But I couldn’t..

I smiled again..

…the little girl hugged me tight


–Her favorite Teddy doll J
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Sunday, 8 May 2016

Hunger


I was in my 7th standard when that incident happened. It was something I would or could never forget. It was a Saturday in the month of November of the year 2000. I don’t remember the exact date though. I was in school then.

Usually Saturdays are holidays for us and in case there is school, it will be a half working day. I was sitting in the Hindi class room, which was in the first floor of our school. Around 11.30 AM we got a circular that, the school hours were to be extended till 4 pm as against the usual closing time of 2 pm.

The circular came in as a shock for me as I had not brought my lunch. My Hindi teacher, as if reading my mind, told us that students those who have not brought lunch could go and order lunch in the office room. I checked my pockets and as fate would have it, I had no money. I had left my purse at home. I felt lost.

A few of my class mates went to the office room to order for lunch. The rest had brought lunch and I was sitting in the class room with them, not knowing what to do. The clock ticked and it was 12.30 pm, our lunch time. I didn’t have the courage to ask money to any of my friends nor my teacher to go and order food, nor was I brave enough to ask for food from the friends who had brought lunch. Everyone around me was eating, while I was sitting clueless engulfed in a fire of hunger.

It was the hardest half an hour of my life. Some of my friends offered me their food, but I denied it, for reasons I don’t fathom. One of my friends then asked,

“You could‘ve ordered lunch and got it from the office room, why didn’t you”

“Well.. I’m not feeling hungry, moreover I fast on Saturdays”, I lied.

“Oh fasting, well, you could still ordered for one packet and given it to me.. anyways it was offered for free, right ?”

“What ?? Free ?? weren’t you charged for this?”

“No.. why would they charge for this ?”

“Oh! My god !” saying, I immediately got up from my desk. It was 1 Pm by then and the school bell rang, indicating that lunch time was over and that the next period had started.

I had been someone who could never withstand hunger, so I ran straight to the office room. Our friendly peon was sitting there,

“Sir… food… hungry… I want to order” I told him as I was breathing heavily after the run.

“Oh no my boy… all the food packets just got over now… you should have come at least five minutes earlier” he was apologetic.

“Sir… is nothing left?”

“No dear… am sorry, why didn’t you order before ? Are you hungry? Wait let me go to the nearby hotel and get food for you”

“No… no… thanks sir… I just… that’s ok…” I didn’t know what to say to him.

.“I would get it for you, wait. You can’t be without eating lunch, you would faint” he insisted

“No sir, thanks” I came out of the office room. I didn’t know what to do. I ran to the rest room and washed my face removing the traces of tear from my face.

 I came out and drank some water and slowly, without any energy walked up the stairs to my Hindi class. I entered the class room and found some-one talking to my Hindi teacher. As I entered that someone turned back.

“Mom… what are you doing here?” I was surprised to see my mom standing in my class.

“I was about to have lunch at home. But I couldn’t eat, something within me was troubling me. I felt that you hadn’t eaten anything. My senses told me that you were hungry. So I packed lunch for you, drove my cycle for five kilometres and reached your school. When I got here, I came to know that school has been extended till 4 pm and you haven’t had lunch yet. What is this ? Why didn’t you order the food in the office room ?” she asked me.
  

“Cos I know you will bring lunch for me, Mom!” I hugged her tightly as I shed tears of joy.



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Scoop News : This is actually a dream I had.

Friday, 6 May 2016

Edith Jane

Edith Jane, is everything –beautiful, attractive, chubby, one could add many more such adjective and it would perfectly suit her. She is a distant relative of mine. I met her eleven years ago when I had gone to my maternal aunt’s house, during my 12th standard summer vacation.

Edith was seven months old then. Her mom was carrying her in her shoulder, when I first saw her. She was wheatish, had a pleasant smile and adorable curly hair. I stretched my hands, asking her to come to me and she immediately obliged without hesitation. Her mom, my mom and my aunt were all surprised at her immediate affection towards me. Her mom kept on reiterating that Edith never goes to anyone leaving her.

My sister Ruth (my aunt’s daughter) then deduced that I look more or less like Edith’s dad and that could be a reason for her attachment to me, whatever.. I had her in my shoulders. Her curly hair was softer than silk. Her eyes were as bright as buttons and were constantly looking out for something interesting.

I carried her to the gardens in the backyard, showing various flowers and trees. She was all smiles and no wealth in the whole world could match the happiness her toothless smile gave. Her smile was so contagious that I couldn’t top myself from smiling along with her.

I then took her to the terrace. My aunt’s house is near the aerodrome, with the planes landing and taking off every now and then. I wanted Edith to see the big silver flying machines. I knew she would like it.

In the terrace, there was a little unfinished square pillar at the centre. I made Edith sit over that comfortably. She did a 360 degree Panavision scan of the surroundings and was all smiles. There is nothing more beautiful in the world, than a smiling baby. Not all kids would keep smiling for such a long time in the company of a stranger… Edith was different and I was no stranger by then.

I carried her in my arms and began to walk along the walls of the terrace, so that she could get a better, closer look at the beauty of the adjacent terrain. She got excited and wanted to get down immediately and play with the trees. She waved one of her arms at the trees as if calling them to come and play with her.

No words came from her little mouth but strange sounds, which I believe the trees could understand. She was talking to them, they were nodding their branches. I asked her

“What honey?”

 “Hmmm…uh…hmmmm..uhh..uh..hmm”

 That made much more sense than what it seems.

 “You want those trees? Yeah, call them, come on call them “ I told her

She turned towards the trees, as if she understood what I said and began to wave at them again, calling them towards her.  After sometime, realizing that they weren’t moving towards her, she turned towards me with a sad look and a let out a big “Hmmmm” as if to ask me “Why are they not coming to me?”

I had no answer.

Wanting to divert her thoughts, I took her to the other side of the terrace, in the direction of the aerodrome. And God bless our luck, a plane took off..

The plane let out high decibels of sound as it hit the sky from the ground that it was too heavy for my ears, I immediately closed her ears. But she didn’t react, she was not scared, didn’t cry, didn’t blink , but was keenly looking at that big silver giant, without batting an eyelid. Not a word until the flight managed to escape our sights.

She then turned to me

“Uhmmmm” she said pointing in the air.

 “Yes…. it has gone”

She once again looked in that direction, into the open sky and gave a puzzling look at me.
I carried her and walked for some more time in the terrace and then took her back into the house.
She then started playing with her dolls in the company of my mom, sister and aunt. I was forced to change priorities and was made to talk with ,my uncle and brother.

We had our supper by 8.00 pm. After that, I sat in the steps of the front door with my brother Franklin (aunt’s son) and was discussing with him about his college life.

Edith’s mom came with her, towards us.

“Franklin, could you make her sleep” saying, she handed Edith to my brother.

“What bro… what are you going to do to make her sleep?”

“Well Dani, she won’t sleep if we lay her on the couch or the floor. She would sleep only if someone carries her along in their shoulder and walk for sometime”

“Oh! Really… Well… then… Let me put her to sleep”
Saying so, I got her from him and carried her in my left shoulder and began to walk, in the portico, as I continued my conversation with him.

I didn’t realize how long I had been carrying her, but slowly felt a paining sensation in my left hand and shoulder. It dawned on me that I had been carrying her for almost 20 minutes in the same position, close to my heart. I wanted to change position and bring her to my right shoulder.

I slowly lifted her from my shoulder, but I couldn’t. She wouldn’t budge. Confused, I looked for what  had happened. I gave a hearty smile when I found that the little one had hugged my neck tight with her little soft hands and that, removing them could disrupt her sleep.

Her arms held on to me, with warmth and a sense of belonging. Her sweet milky smell was all over me and started to fill my senses. I didn’t want to disturb her sleep. She was quietly sleeping, like a cute little doll. I continued to walk.

“What happened?” Franklin asked me

“Just some pain in my left hand bro” I replied

“Change her to your right shoulder then”

“Nah, that’s okay, if I try, she might wake up” saying so, I continued to carry her and walk.

There are certain things in life that gives you utmost satisfaction, which money can never buy. True bliss it was. I walked then for another 15 minutes or so, carrying her, by when, her mom had finished her supper and came to get her.

“Oh she is sleeping in your shoulder ?  Fine let me get her” she said.

“Yeah…. Without disturbing her, careful.. slowly“ I made the best possible effort, not to wake her up and somehow managed to hand her to her mom..

“Thanks Dani… she has slept well”


“Oh you are welcome” I said, as I still felt her milk smell on me.

Thursday, 5 May 2016

Love at First Bite

I couldnt believe my eyes- Sheetal was sitting next to me in the park bench. I wanted to pinch myself and check if it were real. I was all smiles, as I saw the red rose she was holding in her hand.

Sheetal is an ethnic beauty, every guy’s eye candy and could make anyone fall for her just with a smile. She had expressive eyes that could enslave the hardest of hearts. She had a charm like no other, a perfect beauty.

Okay, let me stop my descriptions of her and get into the story.

She was sitting to my right in the bench of Queen’s park, a park dedicated for lovers. I was admiring her beauty and smiled. I thought we were on a date and was waiting for her to hand me the rose, until Ram arrived.

Ram was her second closest friend (me being the first) and I knew Sheetal had a crush on this bloke. He used to frequent her house often and if I happen to be there at that time, I find my own excuses to leave. Most of the times, I could sense his presence in her house, even at the gates, thanks to the peculiar smell of his socks which I believe he never washes.

I wouldn’t have accompanied Sheetal to the park, had I known Ram would be joining us. He came wearing his stupid smile and sat to the right of Sheetal. Sheetal blushed and immediately gave the red rose to him. [Tapp- That’s the sound of my heart breaking] How stupid of me to have thought all the while that the rose was for me.

Ram accepted it and then, there was silence, for two full minutes. None of us spoke. They both were all smiles and I was heart-broken (heard that sound, didn’t ya ?)

It was Sheetal who broke the silence, “ I need to tell you something, Ram”

“Yeah Sheetal.. Sure” saying, he breathed in the smell of the rose, looked at me, winked and gave a wicked smile.  He hadn’t brushed !! [Please don’t kiss him Sheetal, no, not on his mouth]

“I don’t know how to start Ram, but there is something… something I have been hiding from you. It’s killing me every day. .. I donno.. Its  the thought about you.. the way you talk to me.. the way you dress.. the way you carry yourself.. “ Sheetal started.

“How about the way his mouth and socks stinks ?” I wanted to add

She continued

“The way you make me smile..Its like.. you keep me happy always,.. I forget my worries when you  are around.. you.. you complete me” she finished and gave a smile.

I looked at her, she looked mesmerized and plain dumb. It was hard for me to control my emotions. I couldn’t understand why she had never felt anything so for me. I had been her best mate for two long years.  Her closest pal and I knew everything about her, or so I thought. She had never considered me as someone special, more than a friend, but just her play mate. I was friend-zoned. I wondered why beauty always goes hand in hand with stupidity.

Had I known that today’s visit to the park was for her to propose Ram, I would have never accompanied her. I couldn’t move nor could I speak. I was half dead and sat silently.

“You are someone special Ram. I can be what I am with you.. you have shown me my feminine side… and that’s what I like about you… I believe I will be happy forever if I marry you.” Sheetal told in an emotionally serious tone. Ram’s face changed. He was speechless but seemingly confused.

“I know it will be hard for you to take Ram.. But we are made for each other.. Now give me a kiss”

“What ?” it was all too soon and too fast for Ram.

The first drop of tear came from my eyes.

“Just one kiss..” Saying Sheetal embraced him passionately and gave him a kiss.

I never cried when my mom died. But today , I had already dropped a tear for a girl.

“ No .. no Sheetal.. What are you doing.. stop! “ Ram got out of her hold.

“ What Ram ?”

“ I don’t.. I dont love you Sheetal.. I have never had such feelings for you. “ Ram said in an animated tone.

“What? Why ? ”Sheetal was furious.

My tears slowly began to dry up and I sharpened my ears to listen to the conversation. But I didn’t want Sheetal to get hurt too.

“Because..I am already committed”

“What the hell in the world?” I wanted to shout. But Sheetal was calm .

“Oh.. Who is that?” Sheetal asked him in a dry tone.

“Who is who?”  Ram questioned

“Your love.. that bitch Nirmala ?”

“No… not,.. her”

“Then Sangeetha ? I know it has to be her.. I saw you taking her for a ride last week”

“No Sheetal..Come on yar, Sangeetha and I are just friends”

“Then who is she ?”

 “It is.. it is a he..”

“What the heck ?” she screamed.

“Its your brother!”

“Oh My God! Oh My God.. Oh My God.. My brother ???! Shiv ??” Sheetal nearly fainted.

Ram nodded his head.

“Now that explains why you  frequent my house that often. Oh my God. Fine.. Wait.. I cant.. I just cant digest.. Wait.. My brother!.. Is he gay too ?? Oh man.. “

I was in cloud nine.

“Then why did you accept the rose I gave, with a smile? “

“I thought he sent it through you”

“You stupid moron.. “ Saying she gave him one hard slap.

 “Ouch!!!”

“I just don’t want to meet you again ever in my life. Ever….. Alright” Sheetal told him strictly. “But anyways..Thanks. that was a nice kiss”

Saying she got up to leave, hiding her tears. I was so happy and wanted to dance and shout.. And shout.. And shouted..

“Bow Bow ! “


P.S.: In case you didn’t get it, the narrator is Sheetal’s dog, who thought his owner is in love with her. Now go back and read the story again J

Sunday, 1 May 2016

Old Age Home – An Insight From Inside

This post was originally written on Sep 22nd, 2010.
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     I was late for the Old Age home visit organized by Team Everest on September 19th 2010. I reached Rajnikanth Old Age Home at 5.30 PM, by then everything was over and the volunteers were getting ready to leave. I was embarrassed on being late and wanted to do justice to the visit. I decided not to leave with the volunteers, but to stay back and spend some time with the old women.
         
     It was my second visit to the home. I had a very nice time during my first visit. The grand mas made us all sing, laugh and enjoy ; took us back to our childhood days. They also made us cry. Everyone there, had their own story of sorrow. Even a stone heart would melt on hearing those stories. Though i was glad that I had given them a momentary happiness, I had left with a heavy heart, last time.        

     This time it was different, all the volunteers had left and I was the only one in the company of the grandmas. I sat with them in the hall and started talking to them. Some of them remembered me, while some didn’t. I inquired about their health and well being. 

     One of them began to tell me her story.  

     ”I have seen everything in life.. My story will be heavy for anyone to take. You will cry hearing it”. she started

     I didn’t know what to say and she continued.. 

     ”Every woman here has her own story, you can write a book or even make a heart touching movie with their stories”

     ”Even I am a writer ma”  I told her.

     ”Then you can very well write their stories…. without mentioning their names” she smiled. 

     I smiled back. 

     She then began her story, from her birth to the present - all her turmoil and travails, her sufferings and sorrow. I knew my eyes would wet any moment. 

     She had lost her father when she was in her teens. When she was ready for marriage, her relatives intervened and she was married off to a well to do man, as his second wife.  He already had two kids (a girl of six and a boy of four) and so she had decided not to beget any children of her own. Her husband was a very good person and took very good care of her and she took very good care of his children. But as fate would have it, her husband passed away after a few years. She ran the family as a single mother and when time came, managed a grand wedding for both her children.  
        
     She was staying with her son and her daughter in law. Trouble struck when the in-laws came into picture and started frequenting her house. She was constantly ill-fed from then on, her husband’s pension was not given to her and she began to live a life of a servant within her own house. Her daughter in law ill treated and tortured her. She hardly got to eat anything, even once a day.

      She decided to go and live with her daughter, but her experiences there were even worse. She was made to do all household works in spite of her weak body. From cleaning to cooking to all sort of mean work the old woman was forced to do. She could take it no longer and went back to her son’s place, but nothing had changed there as well.
  
      She eventually fled from the house when her son tried to kill her one day (I am not going to explain how he attempted doing it)… Her very own son whom she had brought up since he was four years old, tried to kill her and without a second thought, she left the house!

      She wanted to commit suicide after coming out of the house, not knowing where to go, but wasn’t bold enough to do it.  She finally ended up in the Old Age home after much trouble.

      “I can’t forgive him, I can’t curse him either!” she said, there was tear in her eyes.

      “Don’t, don’t cry mother.. ” I couldn’t speak.

      “He forgot everything I did for him, I was living my life for him, but after his wife came, only that pleasure was important to him.. didnt he know about me..didnt he know how I struggled to bring him up ? Why did he try to kill me?” 

      I had no words to console her. 

      “Its been three years since I came here and nobody knows that I am here, I don’t want them to know too”  

      I was still silently listening to her. 

      ”Now I am happy here though.. these people are taking good care of me. But still somewhere deep, in my heart, I do have a desire to live with my son”

      It was time for me to talk.. I held her hand in mine and said. 

      ”I have no words to console you. But I can promise you one thing. I will make sure that this situation never comes to my mom, or my wife’s mom, also my friends’ moms. And I promise you, I will do my best to change at least a few in the society by writing about this.”

      She held my hand near her eyes and said, 

      “This is what I expect from you. We are happy when you people come to visit us, we forget all our worries. And this is what we expect from you. Never forsake your mother.” 

      “I won’t” I promised 

      ”You will each great heights in writing and in whatever you do. You will live a blessed life” she gave her heartfelt wishes.

      I got her blessings and walked out with a heavy heart. Hers was not the only story, there were many other such similar stories buried in many a hearts.

      We cannot dismiss this incident as something that has happened in some corner of the world. These incidents happen in every nook and corner.  

      Every one of us love our mother and would do anything for her. We would take care of her till our last breath. But will we do the same for our spouse’s mother? Many women are moving or forced to move to Old Age homes due to harsh daughter/son in-laws. It’s high time we change our attitude. Mothers are blessings to family, never forsake them.

      Lets decide this day and promise this.. ”Never forsake your mother, father nor your mother /father -in-law”  and dont stop with your family.. there are your friends, friends of friends, relatives and the all people you know, enlighten them.


      Let’s work towards a society sans Old Age Homes. Let’s work towards making the world a better place to live. I have taken my oath.. How about you ?